Poetry: Metre, Rhyme and Figures

Counting syllables, hearing the rhyme, and reading Darío, Lorca, Storni and Neruda

Spanish poetry is metrical, and every Spanish-speaking schoolchild is taught to count a line. This is not antiquarian: song lyrics scan, advertising slogans scan, and people quote Machado and Bécquer in ordinary conversation the way English speakers quote nothing at all any more.

Counting syllables in Spanish verse is not the same as counting syllables in a word, because of one rule — sinalefa — and one adjustment at the end of the line. Learn those two things and a poem opens up. This lesson teaches them, then the rhyme system, the forms, and a way of reading a poem you have never seen.

1. Counting: the three rules

① Sinalefa — vowels across a word boundary merge

If a word ends in a vowel and the next begins with a vowel, they count as one syllable. A silent h does not block it.

que acusáis → que-a-cu-sáis (3, not 4)

se hace → se-ha-ce (2, not 3)

no hay camino → no-hay-ca-mi-no (5, not 6)

② The final-word rule

Last word is…AdjustmentWhy
Aguda (stress on last syllable)+1andar, azul, razón
Llana (stress on second-last)±0camino, clavas
Esdrújula−1pájaro, lágrima

③ Licences

2. Worked scansion

Caminante, no hay camino,
se hace camino al andar.

— Antonio Machado, Proverbios y cantares

LineCountFinal wordTotal
Ca-mi-nan-te-no·hay-ca-mi-no8camino, llana → ±08
se·ha-ce-ca-mi-no·al-an-dar7andar, aguda → +18

Two octosílabos — the native Spanish metre, the line of the romance, the copla and most folk song.

¿Qué es poesía?, dices mientras clavas
en mi pupila tu pupila azul.

— Gustavo Adolfo Bécquer, Rima XXI

LineCountFinal wordTotal
Qué·es-po-e-sí-a-di-ces-mien-tras-cla-vas11clavas, llana → ±011
en-mi-pu-pi-la-tu-pu-pi-la·a-zul10azul, aguda → +111

Endecasílabos — eleven syllables, imported from Italian in the sixteenth century and thereafter the line of every Spanish sonnet.

La princesa está triste… ¿qué tendrá la princesa?

— Rubén Darío, Sonatina

La-prin-ce-sa·es-tá-tris-te ‖ qué-ten-drá-la-prin-ce-sa = 7 + 7 = 14. An alejandrino, split by a cesura into two seven-syllable halves — the signature line of modernismo.

3. Line lengths and their homes

LineSyllablesWhere it lives
Heptasílabo7Silva, lira, half an alejandrino
Octosílabo8Romance, copla, décima — the popular line
Endecasílabo11Soneto, silva — the learned line
Alejandrino14 (7+7)Mester de clerecía; revived by modernismo

Lines of eight or fewer are arte menor; nine or more are arte mayor. In scansion notation, arte menor gets lowercase rhyme letters (a, b, c) and arte mayor uppercase (A, B, C).

4. Rima

TypeMatchesExample
ConsonanteEvery sound from the last stressed vowelviento / momento; camino / destino
AsonanteOnly the vowels from the last stressed vowelcamino / salido (i–o); sombra / hoja (o–a)
Assonance is the native tradition. English verse barely uses it; Spanish built its entire oral poetry on it. The romance — the ballad form that carries Spanish epic, Golden Age drama and Lorca's Romancero gitano — is an indefinite string of octosyllables with assonance in the even lines and the odd lines unrhymed. That is the whole form, and it is why a romance can run for four lines or four hundred.

5. The forms

FormStructureNote
Romance8-syllable lines, assonant in even lines, indefinite lengthThe national form. Lorca, Romancero gitano.
Soneto14 endecasílabos: ABBA ABBA + two tercets (CDC DCD or CDE CDE)Garcilaso, Góngora, Quevedo, Sor Juana, Lorca, Borges.
Copla / cuartetaFour octosyllables, assonantSong, flamenco, popular verse.
Seguidilla7-5-7-5Dance and song.
Décima / espinelaTen octosyllables, abbaaccddcStill improvised live in Cuba, Puerto Rico, the Canaries and Chile.
Lira7a 11B 7a 7b 11BMystical poetry — San Juan de la Cruz, Fray Luis.
SilvaFree mix of 7s and 11s, rhyme at willGóngora's Soledades.
Verso libreNo fixed metre or rhyme20th century: Neruda, Vallejo, Paz, Pizarnik.

6. The figures of verse

FigureWhat it doesExample
EncabalgamientoThe syntax runs past the end of the line — meaning and metre pull against each other…y mientras miserable- / mente se están los otros abrasando… (Fray Luis)
HipérbatonDisplaced word orderDel salón en el ángulo oscuro… (Bécquer) = En el ángulo oscuro del salón…
SinestesiaCrosses the sensesverde silencio, un grito amarillo
AliteraciónRepeats a soundel susurro de la brisa
SímboloA recurring image with fixed private meaningIn Lorca: the moon = death; green = desire and doom
PersonificaciónGives the inanimate a willLa noche me esperaba.

7. Who to read

PeriodPoetsStart with
Siglo de OroGarcilaso, Fray Luis, San Juan de la Cruz, Góngora, Quevedo, Sor Juana Inés de la CruzGarcilaso's sonnets (clear); Sor Juana's Hombres necios (furious, funny, octosyllabic)
RomanticismoEspronceda, Bécquer, Rosalía de CastroBécquer's Rimas — short, simple, the standard gateway
ModernismoRubén Darío, José MartíDarío, Sonatina; Martí, Versos sencillos (the source of Guantanamera)
Generación del 27Lorca, Alberti, Cernuda, Salinas, GuillénLorca, Romancero gitano
América, siglo XXVallejo, Neruda, Mistral, Storni, Paz, Pizarnik, Nicolás GuillénNeruda, Veinte poemas de amor; Storni's sonnets; Guillén for Afro-Caribbean rhythm
España, siglo XXAntonio Machado, Juan Ramón Jiménez, Miguel HernándezMachado, Campos de Castilla

8. How to read a poem you have never seen

  1. Read it aloud, twice, before understanding anything. The metre will surface.
  2. Count one line to establish the metre; assume the rest follows.
  3. Undo the hipérbaton. Rewrite the sentence in prose order. Most "difficult" Spanish poetry is ordinary syntax displaced.
  4. Find the images, not the words. What is compared to what?
  5. Mark the rhyme letters in the margin — the shape often tells you the form, and the form tells you the tradition.
  6. Only then look anything up.

Practice

Exercise 1: Count the syllables

Give the metrical count (after sinalefa and the final-word rule).

Exercise 2: The final-word adjustment

Answer +1, 0 or -1.

Exercise 3: Name the metre

Exercise 4: Consonante or asonante?

Exercise 5: Name the form

Exercise 6: Name the figure

Where this takes you

One lesson remains. It asks what you do with all of this — how to move meaning between two languages when the words do not line up, where you stand on the arguments that divide the Spanish-speaking world, and how to keep a C2 language for the rest of your life rather than losing it over five quiet years.